Reservoirs (Day 28)
Aug. 31st, 2009 02:51 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
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Am I allowed to admit to loving my own interpretation of the characters? I wanted to show James and Lily at their most awesome here - I was saying the dialogue out loud as I wrote it to try to hear the impact of it (good thing my flatmate's away).
Yeah, so here we have the first of the three times James and Lily defied Voldemort personally and lived. I wanted Lily's defiance to be more visceral - this is a flyting, a word-battle, whereas James is more of a traditional hero. This is the James Potter who died trying to give his wife and child a chance to escape.
And now I have three chapters to wrap this all up. Let's go ^_^
Am I allowed to admit to loving my own interpretation of the characters? I wanted to show James and Lily at their most awesome here - I was saying the dialogue out loud as I wrote it to try to hear the impact of it (good thing my flatmate's away).
Yeah, so here we have the first of the three times James and Lily defied Voldemort personally and lived. I wanted Lily's defiance to be more visceral - this is a flyting, a word-battle, whereas James is more of a traditional hero. This is the James Potter who died trying to give his wife and child a chance to escape.
And now I have three chapters to wrap this all up. Let's go ^_^
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Date: 2009-08-31 07:54 pm (UTC)