Reservoirs (Day 8)
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rosie_ruesPeach inspired chapter here. Longish one, this time.
Okay, so this one pushes the main relationships on a little, but it's really centred around Lily, and how she fits into the group, and how her changing role impacts on the others. Okay, it's got Sirius being pervy with a peach, but it's more about Lily.
I reread the Lily and Severus scenes from Deathly Hallows a few days ago, and it really struck me that Snape has told Lily what he suspects even before the Prank, and that the Prank happens before the Pensieve scene. So, yeah, Lily definitely knows, and that shaped how I wrote her reaction to the Shack. There's a difference between knowing something as a fact and suddenly understanding on an emotional level. I was a little teary-eyed writing that scene, because Remus was so braced for rejection.
I also wanted to move the Lily/James relationship on from the sort of one-sided adoration it was at the start. James is pretty sharp with her when she and Sirius get started in the Shack, which I think really throws her, and then her first sight of Prongs is a real revelation. James' stag form implies so much about him - it's arrogant and powerful, a leader and a defender, yet also a creature which can be hunted. Lily's a bright girl (and, as implied, has watched a lot of nature documentaries), and I think knowing about Prongs would change her perception of James.
Oh, and oblivious!Remus is still oblivious *sigh*
Okay, so this one pushes the main relationships on a little, but it's really centred around Lily, and how she fits into the group, and how her changing role impacts on the others. Okay, it's got Sirius being pervy with a peach, but it's more about Lily.
I reread the Lily and Severus scenes from Deathly Hallows a few days ago, and it really struck me that Snape has told Lily what he suspects even before the Prank, and that the Prank happens before the Pensieve scene. So, yeah, Lily definitely knows, and that shaped how I wrote her reaction to the Shack. There's a difference between knowing something as a fact and suddenly understanding on an emotional level. I was a little teary-eyed writing that scene, because Remus was so braced for rejection.
I also wanted to move the Lily/James relationship on from the sort of one-sided adoration it was at the start. James is pretty sharp with her when she and Sirius get started in the Shack, which I think really throws her, and then her first sight of Prongs is a real revelation. James' stag form implies so much about him - it's arrogant and powerful, a leader and a defender, yet also a creature which can be hunted. Lily's a bright girl (and, as implied, has watched a lot of nature documentaries), and I think knowing about Prongs would change her perception of James.
Oh, and oblivious!Remus is still oblivious *sigh*
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Date: 2009-08-11 08:40 am (UTC)*snickers* I suspect if I'd written Sirius' pov, the peach scene would have been somewhat dirtier, but Remus was too polite and flustered to really get into it.