Sea-gazing ([livejournal.com profile] dogdaysofsummer Day 06)

Jul. 7th, 2006 10:31 pm
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Title: Sea-gazing
Rating: G
Disclaimer: So not mine.
Prompt: we are tied to the ocean
Summary: Bournemouth beach, 1972. 684 words



Remus, up to his waist in the sea, can feel the sand trickling away between his toes. Every wave that washes against him is a little cold shock, and the sun prickles warmly on his back. He looks out to sea, breathing in the salt-sharp air and watching the shadows of the clouds change the hue of the water.

There’s a thump of feet behind him, and Sirius splashes into the water, panting.

“What you doing? Why are you just standing here? Did you lose your trunks?”

Remus gives him a slightly frosty look. It isn’t his fault his trunks have to be tied on with an extra bit of elastic every morning. They’re to grow into, his dad had said.

“No,” he says, and stands on tiptoe to prove it.

“Then what you doing? We’re digging a really big hole, and we’re going to bury Peter in it. Head first.” He rocks back, splashing a little. There’s sand caked all over his torso, and his hair hangs in salty clumps. He’s wearing a pair of cutoff trousers so old and ragged that the patches have patches.

(He arrived at the Potters on the first day of the hols, pale and miserable, despatched alone through the Floo. His mother had provided him with an antique swimming costume, snake green, moth eaten and emblazoned with the house crest. Mrs Potter took one look at his mutinous face and started hunting through her rag bag)

“Is Peter happy about that?” Remus asks dubiously.

“Says he doesn’t mind as long as we buy him ice cream afterwards.”

Remus considers it. “That’s stupid. If you bury him head down, he’ll be dead, and then he won’t be able to eat ice cream.”

“Don’t tell me it’s stupid,” Sirius snaps, splashing him. “Pete thought of it.”

His friends are all completely and utterly peculiar, Remus thinks happily. He loves it.

“What you doing, Remus?”

“I’m looking at the sea.”

“Right.” Sirius plants his feet firmly, and squints out across the water. “Why?”

“Because it’s there,” says Remus.

“Umm.” Sirius falls silent, frowning silently. Remus goes back to gazing at the blue horizon.

“Remus?”

“Yes?”

“What, precisely, are we looking for? Sharks?”

“You don’t get sharks at Bournemouth,” Remus says, before Sirius Get Ideas. Sirius is unnervingly good at Getting Ideas.

“Are you positively, absolutely certain? A hundred and seven percent certain?”

“Infinity percent.”

“Then what are we looking for?”

“We’re just looking,” Remus says, frustrated. “At all of it.”

“Right.”

He goes back to looking at the water, though it’s hard to concentrate with Sirius fidgeting beside him. It’s nice here, miles from home, on a beach with sand instead of pebbles. He misses his dad, of course, and his mum (though he’s been missing her for years). He knows it easier for them if he stays with the Potters, though. It’s the busy season at the B and B and he’s too young to help. Better he stays out of their way, ‘specially if Mum’s having one of her bad spells.

It’s pretty good, this, camping out with the Potters and the others. He doesn’t usually get summer holidays and-

“Remus.”

“What?”

“I’ve looked at it all. What are we going to do now?”

“Look at it again,” Remus says.

Sirius sighs, a heave of breath, and pokes him in the ribs. “Why’re you so skinny?”

“Because I am.”

“Why?”

“Because.”

Why?” Poke, poke, poke goes his finger against Remus’ sun-scorched side.

“Because,” Remus says automatically and slaps his hand away.

“Oy! Oy, you two prats! What are you doing?”

James is standing on the shore, nose peeling, hair on end, plastic spade slung over his shoulder.

“We’re looking at the sea,” Sirius says, tossing his hair.

Remus can see the look of incredulous disgust on James’ face and feels his stomach shrivel with dismay as James declares, “You’re bonkers, you two.”

“You got a problem with that, Potter?” Sirius demands belligerently.

“I’ve got a problem with your face, Black!”

Remus leaves them to fight and smiles to himself, curling his toes into the sand below the water.


Cumberland Dorset Essex Lincolnshire Northamptonshire Sussex

Date: 2006-07-07 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liseuse.livejournal.com
Oh boys! They are such boys. And it is fantastic.

Date: 2006-07-07 10:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com
They're so sweet when they're small and unangsty.

Thanks for the comment :)

Date: 2006-07-07 10:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] such_heights
Eeeee! Too damn adorable!

Date: 2006-07-07 10:45 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com
Thank you :) It was a nice change to write something non-angsty.

Thanks for the comment :)

Date: 2006-07-07 10:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] melandry.livejournal.com
Very nice. Everything is spot-on, from Peter's willingness to do almost anything to be liked (and get ice cream) to the way Sirius is categorically unable to gaze broodingly at the sea. It's wonderful!

Date: 2006-07-07 10:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com
Thank you :) They're fun at this age, and I've always thought that Sirius prefers people to places.

Thanks for the comment :)

Date: 2006-07-07 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mizzmarvel.livejournal.com
A lot of really rather neat imagery here, like Sirius' old swim outfit and skinny little Remus in his too-big trunks; makes it really easy to picture. The dialogue also rings very true, especially the bit about sharks. Oh, little boys and their sharks.

Date: 2006-07-07 10:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com
Thank you :) It's lovely to write them at this age, before things got all complicated and unhappy.

Thanks for the comment :)

Date: 2006-07-07 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com
Hee. They are so young and adorable! I love that Remus is so centered and calm, even at such a young age and Sirius is perfectly boyish. Lovely!

Date: 2006-07-07 11:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com
I think that Remus would be a very serious-minded boy, before the others corrupted him. Children who've lived with a disability after are more grounded.

Sirius is always fun to write, at any age.

Thanks for the comment :)

Date: 2006-07-08 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] futurestarlette.livejournal.com
I'm sorry. I'm a terrible reviewer. XD But I have been reading your dogdays pieces and the summer of '76 series, and they're all fabulous. :D

The boys are so adorable. Sirius and his questions. XD But it's awful that I feel sorry for them even at this age. Heh, at least they're having a good summer.

Date: 2006-07-08 06:11 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com
I'm glad to know you've been enjoying them. :)

I think that Sirius must have been an incredibly persistent child, and Remus is one of the few people that stands still long enough to let him bother them.

Thanks for the comment :)

Date: 2006-07-08 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] expositionary.livejournal.com
Oh, Sirius, Sirius, Sirius. XD I love all of your boys. ♥

Date: 2006-07-08 06:12 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com
Thank you :) They're such fun to write, and it's lovely to see them at this age.

Thanks for the comment :)

Date: 2006-07-09 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sleeper6.livejournal.com
So lovely!

Date: 2006-07-09 09:14 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2007-08-12 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinzuku.livejournal.com

“Says he doesn’t mind as long as we buy him ice cream afterwards.”

Omg, Peter!

“I’ve got a problem with your face, Black!”

That is awesome.

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