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Cute story, and an innocent Sirius eh?

This line made me laugh:
Remus eyed the three empty beds. They looked cold and shadowy. He really didn’t want to have to pick one. He had a bed and he didn’t know what was on their sheets.

I'm glad you're doing a sequel on this.

Here's a bit that probably needs a bit of editorial attention:
He headed for the stairs at a vague stumbled___and Remus
looks like there's a word missing here.