http://guishih.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] guishih.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rosie_rues 2011-02-14 01:54 am (UTC)

This fic is easily counted among my favorites. You are a master story-teller. I wish this was a screenplay for an independent film. Your characterizations are not only true to the show, but consistent throughout the fic. Every time I read a piece of dialogue I could clearly hear the character's voice. What's even more impressive, is that you manage to fill the prompt without making this a diabetes story. The plot is character driven and there are reasons to love every character. The scenes you conjure are intimate without being over-bearing. The narrative makes it seem as if you're sitting with the characters, not just observing them. This is quintessential romantic comedy. My face hurts from smiling. Excellent work.

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