Okay, I have to quote your own piece at you. This was just too good.
“Was she sick in your mouth?”
“That’s disgusting. No.”
This made me laugh out loud, as well as the line about Remus getting sand in his bits. I've got a weird sense of humour but you totally found it with this story. :D And this line...
Remus, whose treacherous body was beginning to register that it was being sat on by Sirius Black, pressed back into the wet grass and tried to summon hypothermia by will alone.
The phrase "treacherous body" is just... perfect.
I love this piece. I can't even think of where to begin. Just... funny, and charming, and realistic. Very realistic, as you've taken the higher road and not had Sirius totally molest Remus upon his being outed.
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Date: 2005-10-21 05:05 pm (UTC)“Was she sick in your mouth?”
“That’s disgusting. No.”
This made me laugh out loud, as well as the line about Remus getting sand in his bits. I've got a weird sense of humour but you totally found it with this story. :D And this line...
Remus, whose treacherous body was beginning to register that it was being sat on by Sirius Black, pressed back into the wet grass and tried to summon hypothermia by will alone.
The phrase "treacherous body" is just... perfect.
I love this piece. I can't even think of where to begin. Just... funny, and charming, and realistic. Very realistic, as you've taken the higher road and not had Sirius totally molest Remus upon his being outed.
Fantastic.