ext_31687 ([identity profile] brighty18.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rosie_rues 2009-06-30 05:49 pm (UTC)

Oh, this fic is made of love and beauty!

You have created such a gorgeous sense of intimacy and a perfect sort of imperfect love. Like this, focused entirely on his spells, there is no diffidence in Remus. Not a movement is wasted. He is all precision and controlled grace, so quietly confident it makes Sirius’ mouth dry. ***sighs***

And Sirius' thoughts at the end, about having a sense of place and something that is his are very natural and thought-provoking. Of course, he'd feel that way. How could he not?

There is nothing which can stop him from loving as he wants. Nothing.

Lovely!

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