Ah, the first-comment tiara and a lovely fic. I'm lucky this morning.
I really, really enjoyed this--the summery, light touch; the casual interactions; the humor; the cleverness with which you wrote a missing chapter while giving it its own world and its own narrative logic. The humor of the point of view. The kidness of the kids. It's all so wonderful. Brilliant! Maggie
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Date: 2006-07-15 02:22 pm (UTC)I really, really enjoyed this--the summery, light touch; the casual interactions; the humor; the cleverness with which you wrote a missing chapter while giving it its own world and its own narrative logic. The humor of the point of view. The kidness of the kids. It's all so wonderful. Brilliant! Maggie