ext_97284 (
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2006-07-09 03:36 am (UTC)
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Oo, this is just
brilliant
. I love the way you handled all the city references, the slight vein of humor running through the melancholy. Especially loved this line:
He can’t bear to cross a bridge, not when he wants to drown
Very beautiful! Well done.
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He can’t bear to cross a bridge, not when he wants to drown
Very beautiful! Well done.