This is beautiful, wow, I feel quite awed. I love your descriptions of England and the sparse style and the use of Chaucer is absolutely inspired and lovely.
Your characterisation of Remus is absolutely perfect - and that's a particularly impressive feat considering the time period. You've given me new thoughts about his character now.
Reading this, I completely forgot it was a hot summer's day - this is so evocative and your descriptions are wonderful.
You know what broke me? Nobody would ever steal his chips again. Guh.
Memories for this one, I absolutely loved it! Fantastic job.
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This is beautiful, wow, I feel quite awed. I love your descriptions of England and the sparse style and the use of Chaucer is absolutely inspired and lovely.
Your characterisation of Remus is absolutely perfect - and that's a particularly impressive feat considering the time period. You've given me new thoughts about his character now.
Reading this, I completely forgot it was a hot summer's day - this is so evocative and your descriptions are wonderful.
You know what broke me? Nobody would ever steal his chips again. Guh.
Memories for this one, I absolutely loved it! Fantastic job.