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melandry.livejournal.com ([identity profile] melandry.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rosie_rues 2006-07-01 08:03 pm (UTC)

This was really thoughtful and well done. I like how Remus can't quite reason out Sirius's motivation, and is stuck with the idea that his Sirius never was. I like that way of imagining how Remus dealt with the betrayal; it fits well around canon.

I am curious as to your reason for having the AU element of the Longbottoms being dead; it didn't seem to make much difference for this story, so I felt like I was missing something.

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