I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

I love putting plot into things - I always feel a emotional plot is more robust if it's combined with another story.

Peter Pettigrew needs fangirls. Even Voldemort gets more love. I strongly believe that Peter was brave (he was, after all, a Gryffindor). Things just went wrong somewhere along the line. I'd love to see a Peter whose initial mistake was recklessness.

Thanks for commenting :)