Caught up. Yay! Poor Lily! But also poor James - that little sequence in which she works her way from Sirius to Remus to Peter with icy politeness, while James stares her imploringly from the sofa, is so funny. I like the way you're bringing in your chapter headings with the promised Peter & Lily trip to see Richard III (who is going to be playing Richard?!?) - and Peter eavesdropping.

And even I have to admit that the Remus/Sirius challenge is, well...