So. I was going to start quoting the lines I loved (first infatuation: the exchanges about why Sirius Black won't live to see 40), but then I realized that I was loving every single bit of dialogue, and that was just not going to work.

I do have one bit that for some reason I loved above all others:

“Arrows!” Nym squeaked, turning pale blue.

“She knows all the team colours,” Ted said proudly.

I think this is just so cute, and sweet, and funny, and it's such a great idea. Love it!

Your dialogue is amazing, I'm jealous.