I'm not good at reading WIPs while they're in progress, but I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this over the last few days. It is so fabulous to read a MWPP story that pays attention to all of the characters (and Lily too!) and makes them all interesting and believeable. I particularly like that Lily and James's relationship is developing in a different way than in most fanfiction. There is so much that I loved about Remus and Sirius in this story, I can't list everything, but I adored the moment when Sirius realized he loved Remus - the 'beautiful bedsprings!' What a fantastic story!